Outside (Spring poem)

Posted on March 27, 2014March 27, 2014 by Ry

This is a poem I made dedicated to outside

I hope you like the poem I made! Please leave feedback and give constructive criticism (which means don’t be mean when you are giving advice)

😀 😀 Ryan 😀 😀

6 thoughts on “Outside (Spring poem)”

Ryan March 27, 2014

Thanks for reading my posts!
1. Ryan March 27, 2014
  
  I almost forgot my smiley face. LOL 😀
2. Don Leavell March 28, 2014
  
  I liked your poem OUTSIDE. Very good.
  I think you might like a bug zapper in the back yard!
  G-Dad
  
  PS keep up the good work
  1. Ryan September 11, 2014
    
    Thanks! Sorry it took me long to reply. I haven’t been on all summer!
David March 27, 2014

Great job! It might find its way to other places on the web!!!
1. Ryan September 11, 2014
  
  Thank you!

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