Outside (Spring poem)

This is a poem I made dedicated to outside

This is a poem I made dedicated to outside

 

I hope you like the poem I made! Please leave feedback and give constructive criticism (which means don’t be mean when you are giving advice)

😀 😀 Ryan 😀 😀

6 thoughts on “Outside (Spring poem)

    • I liked your poem OUTSIDE. Very good.
      I think you might like a bug zapper in the back yard!
      G-Dad

      PS keep up the good work

      • Thanks! Sorry it took me long to reply. I haven’t been on all summer!

  1. Great job! It might find its way to other places on the web!!!

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